100WC Week#13 By Alex

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Posted by 6spupil2016 | Posted in General News | Posted on 29-11-2016

The Crucial Crocodile

Down in the swamp where it’s stinky,

The crocodile will bite your little pinkie,

Even though he growls like a monkey,

A once in a while they even looked a little funky.

 

But always remember what happened to her,

The creeping croc used his lure,

Walking quickly and after the girl’s juicy head,

SNAP, SNAP, SNAP – she’s secretly dead.

 

Now you heard all of this wide story,

A little pretty, orange, lovely, lorry,

Within the crocodile’s completely harassed,

And yet again the story collapsed.

Comments (5)

Wow this was so cool because it’s nice to see a poem every now and then instead of a story all the time. How you rhymed every second line was really good. The words you used were great too. Well done. http://smppspower.weebly.com/100-wc-week-13/aideen#commentscould if you could please check out my story here is the link

I love the poem and it really hooked me in, but next time try to add some feeling to your characters.

Wow! I love poetry, and you wrote an awesome poem! Way to go, Alex! You can check out our posts at:

https://kidblog.org/class/mrs-golds-class-507b/posts/6aze0uf4zussxvr1p0s3m0g8z

Brilliant idea to do a Poem we don’t normally see that for the 100 WC.

I loved his poem it was really good.

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