MY FUTURE KITTEN 100WC Week#15 by Diana

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Posted by 6spupil2016 | Posted in General News | Posted on 13-12-2016

“Hi, my name is Diana and I always wished for baby kitten. Mum says I might be able to get one for Christmas but I doubt that because every Christmas I hoped for a kitten and I always got other stuff: a doll, makeup and a scooter. I told you I just doubt that this Christmas I will get a kitten. So, in 2017, I hope I will!”

“Diana what are you doing?” shouted mum across the room.

“Well I am entering the 100 Word Challenge and I am definitely going to get a kitten!”

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Rules: * means star which means something that you did well.
# means wish which means something you could improve on.
? means question and that one is self explainatory.

Hi, great story.
*It was really funny at the end when you said “Well I am entering the 100 Word Challenge and I am definitely going to get a kitten!” It made me laugh.
*It was very unique.
#Maybe you could of fitted in more adjectives.
?Are you a dog admirer aswell?
Please comment on my story here’s the link
http://smppspower.weebly.com/100-wc-week-15/christopher

Well done Diana I really like the way you said,’Well I’m entering the 100 word challange and I’m definitely going to get a kitten’.

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