100WC Week#29 by Phoebe and Bobby

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Posted by 6spupil2016 | Posted in General News | Posted on 02-05-2017

The Day Aliens Came to Earth

It was an ordinary day, in an ordinary house until something happened.

“MUM!” screamed Josh.

“What now?” sighed Josh’s mum, tiredly.

“Something is touching my head and it feels slimy!” Josh said in a worried voice.

Soon after, Josh told his mum,¬†she walked up the stairs and looked in the basement she saw a bright green slime mixer. She knew what touched Josh’s head… it looked like slime was dripping through the ceiling she had a lot of questions: what is making it? Who is placing it there? And has anyone seen this before?

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Great job Phoebe! We really liked how you used the colon and then listed the questions.Keep up the good job!

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