100WC Week#30 by Diana


Posted by 6spupil2016 | Posted in General News | Posted on 09-05-2017

 A Normal Day?

It was a normal day doing the same routine every morning: doing my hair, eating my breakfast, brushing my teeth, changing into my school uniform and going to school. However, today was different. Today I was meeting my mum’s best friend after school. You may be thinking, “What’s wrong with that?”

Well my mum’s best friend – Ria – is a crazy old cat lady. She loves cats but that is just the beginning; she is a HORRIBLE cook. “Oh no! Am I late for school?” I yelled.”Mum, MUM I need a ride to school and I need my breakfast mum!” I continued.

There was no reply. The house filled with silence. Wasting no time, I rushed to the kitchen, admiring what was on the table. I just couldn’t eat something so well-decorated!

Comments (2)

Well done Diana. This story is well written and you used the prompt ‘…I just couldn’t eat something so…’ nicely.

Well done Diana I love your hyphenated adjective next time maybe include more action

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