100WC Week#30 by Jessica

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Posted by 6spupil2016 | Posted in General News | Posted on 09-05-2017

Dinner with Granny 

My mum went out last night, again, so I had to go to stupid old granny’s house. She’s always cooking: I don’t know why everything she makes tastes like cat fur and smelly socks. I refused so mum dragged me to the car; the whole way there I dreaded going to her house. Then my nightmare turned into reality. I  walked through the door and into the house of horror and, as usual, dinner was already cooked. It looked horrible, which didn’t surprise me it always does, so then I sat up at  the table. “It’s OK, Gran, I’m not hungry.”

What was I supposed to say? I couldn’t eat something so disgusting.

Comments (2)

Beautifully punctuated Jess. Perhaps more adjectives next time?

Mr S 🙂

Well done Jess. I like how much exaggeration there is but you could make it more descriptive.

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