100WC Week#34 by Harry

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Posted by 6spupil2016 | Posted in General News | Posted on 06-06-2017

Water Attack

“Harry!” called my dad. “Come help me!”

“With what?” I asked.

“The sink.”

As I jogged down the stairs, I noticed a drill on the floor and I immediately knew that dad was doing something to the pipes.

“AAAHHHH!!” my dad screamed. I ran into the kitchen to see my dad being sprayed in the face by water from the pipes; he tried to stop it but the water just kept gushing out.

“Oh my goodness!” I shouted through my laughter. “What happened?!”

“I don’t know!” he replied. “Go turn off the water supply!”

“How?!” I questioned. Before I could go anywhere, my mum turned off the water supply and stood in the doorway with her face red with anger.

Comments (2)

Awesome work! I really liked how you used speach in your writing, it helped me relate more to the story. Is this a true story? One thing that I think you could try next time is using more adjectives to make the story more interesting.
-Samantha, Hamilton New Zealand
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very funny keep up the good work and amazing speech

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